Monday, October 6, 2008

Video Journal 3

7 comments:

suzukaze said...

I really thought this was interesting. It kept my attention throughout the film. I liked how you interacted with your environment to show the complexity of the area. Great job.

Dustin Potter said...

Really great use of the location. Nice audio. I would like to see the shot of you climbing the staircase. More engaging camera work would be great, maybe with you behind the camera working with a model instead. I think this video needs a concluding shot after you walk off screen. Nice work.

jacqueline quebec said...

Putting yourself in the video made it more interesting. The shots you used were good. Maybe have the camera closer to you climbing the ladder.

Unknown said...

this video was very interesting. it kept my attention through the whole thing. It might have been better if you showed more camera angles.

maryann said...

I wasn't really sure what you were doing. I liked where you shot it and I also think you had some really great angles. I think it would also have been more effective if the cuts were a little shorter that way you get a better view for when you are further from the camera.

Madison said...

The pacing was very nice in this. I liked the sound of the crickets too, I think that really added a little something special to it. I agree with Dustin though, a shot of you going up the stairs would have enhanced this video. Where is this place? I wanna go!

ridgerat89 said...

i liked it a lot. it was an interesting location that you went to not one that you would see everyday